Once upon a time there lived a girl named DA. She was kind and sweet. Destiny was watching her and decided to play with her. It put obstacles in her path, and saw her reaction. DA removed it and walked in her path. Same thing repeated for so many times. DA started to feel that some one was playing and watching her reactions. There came a day when DA decided to react different. That time destiny put obtacles in the path as usual. Instead of removing it, she searched who put it there. She saw destiny hiding behind a tree and watching her. She went near to destiny. Destiny was surprised. DA took her sword and slayed destiny's head. Then removed the obstacle and walked in her path. She was happy, she was now kind and steel hearted lady. But destiny was not that much powerless. Its head grew back in few minutes, but DA didnt know it. After few months once again destiny put obstacles in DA's path. Seeing the same obstacle, DA realised destiny was not dead. She saw it coming towards her with a mocking smile.
DA took her sword and inserted it in the right eye of destiny saying " This is for watching me helpless". Then she cut the heart of destiny saying " This is for your heartless actions". Destiny was shocked. Its body part wont grew back with out heart. It asked DA, "Please give my heart back, here after I wont do anything against you". That was not DA's plan. She said to destiny, "I need a slave to work for me. And you are very much suitable for it". Destiny replied, "Its my duty to put obstacles in people's path. I agree, I put a lot in your way, but it was meant to make you stronger. It was for your own good". DA replied "Its my duty to travel in my own way and remove the obstacles forever. Now I need you to remove all the obstacles in my way". DA made destiny's heart as a pendant and wear it as a locket. Now DA became a kind, steel and smart hearted lady. Daily destiny made flowers to bloom, birds to sing, people to greet in DA's path. After watching her closely Destiny summoned the Universe and planets and take a oath that it will be slave to DA in all her birth. DA gave an artificial
eye and heart to destiny. DA has became a kind, steel and smart hearted princess now.
23 comments:
True.
A wonderful ending. Have a good day!
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DA was very clever, and now we have great effects. Regards.
You have a great imagination to tell this interesting tale. There are a lot of lessons here for every day life, thank you :)
How nice it would be for people especially the kind, smart and steel hearted tomake destiny their slaves as you did. You imagination ran riot to subdue destiny while all people are slaves to destiny!
wonderful story.. beautiful ending with full of hope..
If obstacles are not placed on DA's way, DA will not grow stronger!! As you said, destiny was only doing its duty - allow it :)
Destination Infinity
I have never seen "Once upon a time", but enjoyed your text very much.
Looking forward to reading your interesting and inspiring posts!
That is some brave story.
that is not only interesting but motivating as well!
Nice expression of courage!
Btw. for your query at my blog... chittu kuruvi is nothing but the house sparrow.
Dear DA - What an interesting story! We can’t avoid Destiny but can choose how to deal with it. Don't let Destiny win but we'll win by dealing it wise and learning the lessons. Thanks for the reminder.
Yoko
a story of courage and motivation!!!
...life deals you and hand of cards and you need to decide how to play them.
Very interesting story with beautiful end.
You should be writing and publishing short stories.
A lovely tale indeed!
Such lovely description with positive message. Enjoyed it sooo much!
You are wonderful story teller my dear!
Oh you made me smile when I got to the end of your tale DA.. I was wondering where the inspiration for your tale of destiny came from ☺ you have a wonderful imagination!
Great lessons through a lovely story!
Have a Happy Day!!
Peace :)
I like it.
What a wondeful tale indeed!!
Have a gorgeous weekend :)
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