Monday, October 22, 2012

Beyond...U & Me...

I still not feeling sleepy after heavy work out in gym also. Have got poetic lines in my brain.

Beyond your eyes
I saw calm
Beyond your words
I saw pain
Beyond your lips
I saw smile
Beyond your heart
I saw cruelity

Beyond my smile
There is tears.
Beyond my calm
There is hurt
Beyond my pain
There is sorrow
Beyond my cruelity
There is heart, which is so pure...

Corrected version

when I see your eyes, I see clamness
when I hear your words, I see lot of pain
when I feel your lips, I see smile
when I feel your heart, I see lot of cruelness

when I am calm, it means I am hurt
when I smile, you can see lot of tears
beyond my pain, there is sorrow
beyond my cruelness there is a heart which is calm and pure

You are salt,
I am sugar.
You are coffee
I am tea.
You are modern
I am orthodox
You are Joy
I am sad
Thats U & Me

you are salt, i am sugar with malt
you are fast and i am careful
thats what makes our life joyful
you are happy when i am sad
which makes me feel bad

11 comments:

Known Stranger said...
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Ashitha said...

Profound...Loved it. And love is beyond those imperfections. Good one. Keep going :)

Devilish Angel said...

Known stranger : Why not blogging nowadays?

Ashitha : Thank you...

Krishna said...

hi angel

nice lines... well...

thanks for sharing...

ladyfi said...

Well written!

Destination Infinity said...

The corrected version of the first poem is too good... :)

Destination Infinity

Betsy Adams said...

Very nice poem... Sometimes the differences in us in relationships make us stronger together!!!!! Sometimes --when there is nothing much we have in common and neither person comopromises, the relationships struggle...

Hugs,
Betsy

Ash said...

Interesting!

George said...

The different versions of your poem are very interesting.

rainfield61 said...

There is black when we have black.

We can be right if there is wrong.

Carolina said...

Very nice. =)


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