People can hear what you are talking
People can listen to the meaning
But I can understand you
Even though I am deaf
People can see your beauty
People can admire your looks
But I can find you
Even though I am blind
People can be loyal
People can cheat
But I can be true to you
Even though I am feelingless
Poeple say you are a hero
People say you are a villian
But I say you are infinity
People can live in past
People can live in future
But I can live with you - in present
You are time
And I am Devilish Angel
28 comments:
Very nice.
...you have a way with words!
Nice perception!
Hi! Very nice post. You are like a true Angel.
@Rajesh : Thank you...
@Tom : Thank you Tom...
@Jeevan : Different too :)
@Minoru Saito : Thank you so much for your compliment :)
"But I can understand you
Even though I am deaf"
I can hear you. Something very profound in this!
These are insightful words and thoughts.
Hi
Thanks for dropping in and leaving a comment at my place. It is always fun to see new names in the feed. Hope you're having a great December.
- Mac
And I am Rainfield.
:-)
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@Sandi : Thank you...
@George : Thank you George...
@Author R. Mac Wheeler : Thank you...
@rainfield61 : Hahaha. True :)
So beautiful poem.. it made my eyes moist... big hug!!!
Being present - I love that and your poem is very nice.
Thanks for visiting my site.
Have a Happy Weekend.
Peace :)
Beautiful! You can write very well! Have a great day!
@Krishna : Thank you for your kind words :)
@GreenComotion : Thank you...
@Nancy Chan : Thank you Nancy...
It's always fun to read a good poem.
Beautiful poem! Time continues like the curl on your clock!
Such a very nice poem, I enjoyed it.
I enjoyed your poem very much.
@Ratty : Yeah...
@Tomoko : Different clock :)
@bill burke : Thank you...
@John M : Thank you John...
Love your poem, it's good.
Time you spent writing this poem is not a wasted time. I loved this poem.
Ah, brilliant. Hello Devilish Angel, I want to be like you!
wonderful and beautiful thought .
time is is friend if you are loyal and caring.
time is enemy when you waste it though.
@Margaret-whiteangel : Thank you...
@SG : Thank you :)
@Arti : Thank you for kind words :)
@baili : Wise words...
Truth versified.Nice version.I too have just posted a poem about 'Time'.
@rudraprayanga : I read it and commented :)
Very original poem and the words ring true.
@ Beatrice P.Boyd : Thank you :)
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